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I love this so much! Ahh! <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!! <3 (PS: You'll be in the story too, don't you worry... ^.^)
DeleteTHE START SCARED ME BECAUSE SEPT 7TH IS WHEN I LEGITIMATELY GO BACK TO SCHOOL!
ReplyDeleteAnd I love this! Unlike mine, which is all over the place and a bit insane, this is really good!
Jamaasian high-2.0 now with 100% less madness XD
I cant wait to read more :0
-AJKraft
Madness is good, Kraft! One realistic, relatable, Jamaasian High, and one random, silly one! The perfect mix, in my opinion!!! I love them both!
DeleteWait
DeleteDoes that mean that mine is only relateable for me..
I guess I have a mad school then..
XD
-Kraft
I bet it's relatable to some.
DeleteDoesn't really matter, though. Your Jamaasian High is still a great story, and it always make me crack up. :P
@AJkraft
DeleteLOL! I just picked the day my school starts! XD
Thank you so much! I love you funny version! I didn't want this to make you feel bad. I just wanted to do my own take on it. And a 'mad' school isn't bad! I love mad! XD
Thanks so much, though! ^.^
@Swirlshine
DeleteYes! I totally agree with you. My story is more serious and normal, while Kraft's makes people laugh and is funny and loud!
Like Swirlshine said, a perfect mix! ^.^
@Lostfairy
DeleteIt didn't make me feel bad! I love seeing people build on things I dream up( though in this case it was also Swirlshine)! My own version is indeed intended as a "crackfic" , rather then a serious story. It was gonna be serious, but I often write a chapter of JH after a chapter of AJA. Since AJA is mostly a serious story, I need myself humerous relief, and end up going a bit insane XDD
It'd be awesome to see even more jammers create Jamaasian highs. And I may or may not be working on another blogger related story... You will have to wait and see ;)
--AJKraft
Ps. Since my Jamasoan high is intended yet failed to be a collab, if you have the time, maybe you could consider writing a chapter! Or just insert a moment from your own book into it! I'm not asking, just wondering.
@AJkraft
DeleteOk, good! It's really funny the way you have it. :D It's so wonderfully crazy! XD Lots of yelling and fun. Keep doing what your doing with your story. ^-^
It would be! Man, to see what everyone's opinions on it... Awesome! ;D And :o I can't wait!
P.S. I would love to! Though I don't know how I could do it as crazy awesome as you do. :) And hmm... That's an idea! :D
I love this story!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI am so excited to see who else is introduced! Like me. *Stares hopefully*
XDDDDD, sorry.
Thanks so much, Swirl!!!
DeleteXD Don't worry! You'll be in there soon enough. XD
LOL, it's fine! XDDD
Your in it... XD
Delete*Looks back at this comment*
DeleteOM
I WAS SO MEAN!
LIKE WHAT THE HECK
"Like me. *Stares hopefully*"
IT'S YOUR STORY SO YOU CHOOSE WHAT TO DO WITH IT
WHY DID I DO THAT?!
XD, I apologize for Young(er) Swirl's straightforward comments.
YAS another chapter!
ReplyDelete*reads*
why is Aparri always stealing the spotlight. *teleports into the story and dumps a glass of rootbeer on him* U NO STEAL MY SPOTLIGHT APARRI!
Jk, jk.
Also I want to know who the emo kid is... If its an actual jammer, I have a hunch I know who it is. Not too sure though :P
And even more of our crew is here! But still not me. But that's fine lol. I was probably a kid screaming for Wisteria to be their partner XD
Keep up the good work!
-Kraft
XD
DeleteOk, why he is in there again is because I'm making AJ into a school so it has all the same things. Since Aparri is famous in AJ and people talk about him, I added him again. XD I'LL ADD YOU, DON'T WORRY!!!
Heh heh heh... XD
Yup! Man, I still have tons of people to add. I'll have to make a list! XDD And mayyybbeee. XD
Thanks so much, Kraft!!
I know XD
DeleteI tried to do the same thing with mine, but ended up turning it into... An average day in my school.
Here's a bit of advice, based on the fact you said about all the people you need to add-Try to keep up with what you're doing by introducing new characters gradually. Otherwise, from personal experience writing a story with about 30 main characters(AJ Adventures), things can get a little wild. Even in my own JH, I frequently forget characters, or people appear too frequently. I'm having this trouble with AJA alot, especially in the one I'm working on right now. I can be like "oh yay I'm done"
Then I read it and realise a highly important character doesn't even appear. THE STRUGGLES OF WRITING DX
-Do I even need to say who I am lol
Thanks for the advice, Kraft! I agree, too many characters added at the same time is hard to read. I have this LONNNNG list of characters I need to add or have added. O.O HOW WILL I KEEP THEM ALL STRAIGHT! XD
DeleteYes, many struggles comes with writing. But also, many joys. XD (I sound like I make quotes. O,o)
For AJA, I have a 'book'. I give each character a page in which I include a sketch, their likes, dislikes, cause of death(cries), etc. It's taking forever though, since I constantly give characters new traits and sometimes (in the case of Luke and Stardust) completely change their species.
DeleteYou're right, many joys do come with writing. Apart from when I reread some of my stories and cry XD
WOOO! I'm loving this story more and more and MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYAY!!! XDD Thanks, Swirl!!! :D
DeleteI don't usually read aj stories but this one is amazing:)
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks so much, Violet! :D
DeleteIt's so awesome! And I'm in it? Yay! xD In Real Life, I have dark hair though. I can guess why you thought Carmel! There should be secret crazy love triangle thingy between Aparri, Wisteria, and Julian! That would be hilarious. XD
ReplyDeleteLOL, thanks! Man! XD Do you want me to change that? Me and Koolest were trying to guess what color of hair you had and we thought caramel. XD And :O I was thinking of that but I am so glad I got your opinion on it. :D (Though, I know how Aparri talks but I haven't seen any Julian or Wisteriamoon videos so I don't know how they talk. I should watch them soon so I can add them. XD)
DeleteWisteria is just REALLLLLLLLLY crazy and HYPER! Julian's all scientifical. *Julian Voice* The scientific properties of this matter indicates that this is a socialistic item generally known to be the uppermost value to many Jammers or inhabitants of an animal populated land called Jamaa. (That's probably a crazy exaggeration XD Don't tell Julian I said that!!)
DeleteXD That's cool. I actually have this huge "pet peeve" about famous YouTubers who capture the minds of the masses with propaganda and rumors about "rare is cool", love triangles/drama, and "WAR ON AJHQ!!" Grrrrrrrrr....
DeleteIronically, I have never watched a video of the Jammer whom I would likely most enjoy. I really like that he is content-driven, and will try out some vids by "the nerd". CX
And... I'm a bit embarrassed to admit this.... But he's kinda cute. XD
Eh. Vids aren't my thing. Seeya in the swamp! Gonna visit the Frogsloth! :P
(DXplorergirl)
@Sky
DeleteYeah, she sounds pretty crazy. o.o And LOL! I haven't seen anything by Julian so I dunno. He LOOKS nerdy. XD
@Kara
Ha, me too... Me too. XD
O,O LOL! That's totally fine! ;) It's not wrong to think that. XD
:O Frogslooth! (Did you know, Aparri said 'slooth' in one of his vids by accidence and now people keep saying 'slooth' instead of sloth. o.o At least, that's what I'm guessing what happened.)
:blush emoji: Just a smidge. XD XD Thanks. :)
DeleteNo, I did not know that. o.o I did the same thing, oddly. Me and some buddies were hanging out shortly after their release, and I was singing "SLOOOOOOOOOTH" in an opera voice.
My buddies pointed out that it looked like "slooth" in chat, and that inspired me to create the... get ready....
SLEUTH SLOTH! It's a Sloth wearing an Investigator's Hat. Get it? Get it? XD Bad puns.
(DXplorergirl)
Hello Lostfairy!
ReplyDeleteI learned about Jamaasian High from fellow blogger and good buddy Graciepopstar91! I blog for her Animal Jam Frienship Community on Blogger. I also have my own, younger, fanfiction-centric blog called DXplorergirl on WordPress. Yes, I'm plugging us both, not about to hide it. XP
This is a REALLY great story! Your style of writing is clear and uncluttered, yet fully descriptive! It leaves nothing out. :) I can see the setting and characters well in my mind's eye.
It would be VERY cool if I could be in it, just in passing is good. :D I'm a Hyena, with cream fur and a tan mane wearing a white Princess Dress. I believe I would do one of these things:
1. Sit in a corner of the cafeteria with my nose in a Sherlock Holmes book and my mouth full of something with cheese in it. :P
2. Think up a way to help poor Aparri hide. XD
3. Draw a Masterpiece in art class, probably an interpretation of Van Gogh's Starry Night.
4. Punch out a hacker trying to steal my Friendship Bracelet! CX Lol, disregard that. I have action hero fantasies.
It'd be cool if you could do that! If no, it's okay. I'm there in my mind already! :D
You go, girl!
(DXplorergirl)
(You have a good idea Kara!) I am a bunny, with a idk how to describe color (XD) look at my profile picture to find out.. lol Wearing a rare old hood and blue clover blanket)
Delete1. Reading SOMETHING by Bryan Davis or Scott Appleton on breaks
2. Telling everyone to leave Aparri alone
3. pretty much failing at math(ok I'm not THAT bad at math. Point is, I am bad at math lol)
4. Sticking up for kids who are being bullied ( I AM DAH HERO OF THE SCHOOL! jk. lol)
5. Drawing random things in art class ;) mainly sunsets and AJ pigs.
I also
Love playing the piano, friendly, and funny
Like Kara said, you dont have to. But it would be cool. No pressure! :)
JAM ON!
I'll put ya in mine too if you want :)
DeleteIts currently on SwirlShine's blog, but will soon be moved onto the AJFF along with my other stories, AJ Adventures and AJ Story mode.
Mind you, if you like clear, uncluttered writing, my version of JH likely isn't for you. Its pretty random. You might enjoy AJA though.
*shameless self advertising*
-AJKraft
Wow! :D Epic! I'd love to be in your Jamaasian High, AJKraft! Thanks very much for offering! *AJ smiley emote* :) :D :) :D :)
DeleteIt's not that I only read uncluttered writing, mind you. I enjoy all ways of storytelling, and as above comments said, crazy is good! (I should know, I've been nutso for years. XP)
I would very much like to check out your stories, I'll do it now! Oh wait... I gotta write a post for Gracie's blog... Wuh-oh! #Co-authorDilemmas >.<
It's not due until tomorrow, I can read now. I look forward to it immensely! :D
(DXplorergirl)
:reads chapters 1-4: AHHHAHAHA-HAH-SOMEBODEEE-HEEHEEHELP MEEHEEHEE HAHA-I-CAN-NOT-STOP-LAUGHINGHAHAHAHAHAAA!!! XDDDDDDDDD
DeleteNow I know the meaning of ROFL!! Well, actually I don't, I was laying faceup on my bed with the laptop on my stomach... But you get the picture.
:reads the segment of the Minecraft fanfic: Oooooooh no way, freaky! My Minecraft dog is named Benedict! :P
Great story, AJKraft! HIGHLY enjoyable. :D XD :D
(DXplorergirl)
Glad you like it! ^•^
DeleteAnd whoa! Though I don't imagine your dog is a magical chicken that lays creatures XD
-Kraft
XDD Kraft
DeleteALSO idk if this is important.. Julian2 is my favorite youtuber, (and also Kraft I read your Jammasian High) SOOOO FUNNY! XDDD
@Karalee/DXplorergirl
DeleteWow, really? (Thanks, Gracie. XD) I would love to check out your blog. In fact, I'll do it today. :D
Thanks so much! I was really hoping my details and stuff weren't cluttered and confusing. ^.^
Totally! Thanks for telling me! I will add/have added you to chapter 4. ^-^
Thanks for the details! It's really helpful. :) I will try to write you, hopefully I do it good. (If not, tell me and I shall change it. XD)
LOL, I love adding new characters!! (hopefully I can keep everyone straight! XD So. Many. Charcters. XD)
Thank you!!! Go girl too!!
@Sarahkey8
DeleteI'll totally add you! (or have I already in chapter 4... XD)
The details you gave me are very helpful! Thank you! <3
No problem, I loved adding you! (gasp, I HAVE added you! :O XDDD)
@Ajkraft
DeleteXD NOOO! YOU ADVERTISED!! *deletes* XD Lol, no, I'm joking. You can do that kind of advertising. :)
And your story is so funny, Kraft! XD
@Lostfairy
DeleteYAAAAAYAYAYAY! Eeeeeeee! Yay! Yay! YAY! *jumps around* Thank yooooooooou! I look forward to it even MORE now!
To save trouble with that double-user of mine, you can call me DXplorergirl if you prefer.
Thanks again! :D
(DXplorergirl)
^.^ *jumps around in happiness* XD
DeleteI'm commenting on too many blogs for my own good
ReplyDeleteThis seems pretty cool, would you mind adding me in?
I'm a sassy student who doesn't really like any popular kids
occasionally she and Aparri find themselves together and have a little chat
I would ship myself with Aparri but i don't want to c:
LOL, me too. :P
DeleteThanks! I would love to add you! It might be in chapter 5 or 6. I don't know. XD
Thanks a lot for the details!
And ha. XD Maybe I should try to ship you... XD C:
@CappucinoCoffee
DeleteO.O Your user. Must. Eat. Your user.
#NoCoffeeYet
(DXplorergirl)
Thanks!
DeleteSorry for the late reply, hope it's ok.
And sense I'm pretty sure you read the Animal Jam Community. You know I LOVE owl city XDD (and cheesecake mmmm lol)
ReplyDeleteYup, I do read AJC. And I do know that as well. XD
DeleteAnd Julian2 is my favorite youtuber (AHEM KRAF lol)
ReplyDeleteLOL, knew that as well. (and that may or may not be in my story... XDD)
DeleteXD
DeleteJulian2 is my second favourite AJtuber lol
Delete-Kraft
Oops, or was that Swirl who didn't like Julian... SOMEONE DIDN'T! XD
DeleteOh man. This story is AWESOME!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, K9!! ^-^
Delete(You shall be in JH, just you wait... XD)
I AM FANGIRLING!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!! This comment literally brightened up my day!!
DeleteThat's literally how I feel when I see my friends talking with someone else. I don't to interrupt and make it awkward, so I wait till they come to me. Probably need to fix that though.
ReplyDeleteHmm, me too. XDD I really need to fix that too. They would probably be fine with you joining the conversation. :D
DeleteDodgeball...
ReplyDeleteThat game is my worst enemy.
I have bad aim, no desire to win that game, and a wrenched shoulder from throwing a dodgeball once.
Lol, I would be throwing dodgeballs at everyone dodging everyones ball
DeleteOk, NOT
I would be screaming NOT IN THE FACE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL, you guys. XD You make me laugh. XDD (actually, if I had made me more 'realistic' for the dodgeball scene, I would have sucked because my aims for throwing balls stink. XD)
DeleteThat is the best portral of Fman ever. The evil kid in Gym Class. XD
ReplyDeleteXDDD
Delete*snort-laugh* Yeah. I have my doubts and theories on that guy. Many myths are based on truth, but we may never know what the truth is.
DeleteI really enjoy the part that you added when Fman was facing Aparri, and trying to "get into his head", like getting into an account. That was a very clever way to represent the character. :)
I have a small question. I'm homeschooled, but Jamaasian High really appeals to me, and I feel inspired! I'm very appreciative of the idea/clearance to write my own version. :D
Would it be in any way possible for a Jammer/student to be somehow stuck in a school for a few days/weeks? (Not necessarily in real life, the excuse can be improbable or a little silly.)
I was thinking that perhaps my character Ida would make an interesting viewpoint for a Jamaasian High. She is the daughter and "apprentice" of one of Jamaa's top agents for the Alphas, and learns fighting and survival skills from him, along with studying usual subjects.
I think that this could lead to an unorthodox view of a public school. Not to say that her views are necessarily mine. ;) I am not a pink Snow Leopard. I am a cream-colored Hyena with a fondness for coffee. :P
My goodness, this comment got long! o.o Sorry about that! Seeya later! :D
(DXplorergirl) on an iPad with login issues -_- :P
@Skywatcher
DeleteLOL! XDDD
@DXplorergirl
Aww, your so sweet!! That is one of the nicest compliments ever! <3 (I actually didn't even THINK about that until you mentioned it. Then I was like, "Oh yeah!")
Aww, I'm glad you feel inspired!!
What do you mean, stuck in a school? Do you mean someone would get stuck in the school over night? Cuz, Jamaasian High is a boarding school so... XD Or do you mean Ida would get transferred over to JH for a while? Sorry. XD
And I LOVE long comments! XD Seeya later! ^.^
^ That up there should say Karalee ;)
Delete@Lostfairy
No, no, oops! XD Silly me! Not stuck stuck, I meant transferred for one reason or another. Maybe she COULD literally get stuck one night, and be locked in the school 'cuz she didn't get to her dorm in time... 0.0
But I meant transferred. I gave it a good bit of thought, but I'm really blanking on this. Is it possible, or do I need to try looking at another angle?
It seems that I can easily insert characters into situations in my mind, but I stink at actually figuring out logically why they're there. XP
Glad you love long comments, 'cuz I love to write 'em! :D BTW, are you my buddy? I'm sorry, but I can't even keep track of my cousins. CX If not, I'd love to add you! Shall I send you a request on AJ?
(DXplorergirl)
Hmm, I don't know how I could add her. XD I haven't read your Ida story (gasp, sorry!) so I dunno how she acts and stuff.
DeleteAlso, SO SORRY THIS IS WAY LATE!
Lol, no prob. XD I didn't mean that you needed to add her here, I was thinking about making a JH of my own! :D
DeleteBrainstorming always goes better with more than one brain, so I was asking for any suggestions/possibilities on a situation where Ida would need to go to Jamaasian High for a while. It seems improbable that she'd end up going there, really. Perhaps a new character is called for! :o
The Ida Story was my first fanfic work, so it's a bit rough around the edges. In the beginning, it was posted on the Daily Explorer, conforming to the old text limit of 250 words. Later, a new limit of 1000 characters (including spaces) made that impossible.
At least it has an ending! XD That's more than I can say for most of my fanfictions! That said, it's still not as polished as the Frogsloth. :P
(DXplorergirl)
Where did Julian2 is a nerd come from??? XD Someone answer meh.
ReplyDeleteWINNER GETS A SPIKE!
(jk) XDD
Uh, they got it from... Me.
DeleteXD JK, not me.... I don't know, is he actually a nerd? I haven't watched any vids of his so...
YAY, A SPIKE!!! XD
Awww.... XD
@Lost Fairy
DeleteOn only 1 video. XD
Julian2 usually makes Animal Jam fact videos which might be the factor to why people think he's nerdy. He does seem like it in his videos... xD
DeleteGood point.... But in only like 1 video I would say he seems like a nerd XD
DeleteI'll admit, Julian2 used to be pretty nerdy, but I think he's better about that now. If you watch his video where he reacts to his older videos, you'll see what I mean. XD!
DeleteHis videos are actually rather entertaining, though! He gets a lot of cool glitch pictures and has lots of conspiracies! :DD
-swirlshine (school computer)
I like the new chapter! When you said that you saw someone reading Sherlock Holmes I knew it was Karalee XD And I knew when u said I was reading a Bryan Davis book it was me. lol!
ReplyDeleteTysm for adding me in! :D
Aww, thanks! LOL, yeah. I knew you liked Bryan Davis so. ;)
DeleteYwsm! :D
Yay! TYSM, Lost! :D It's EPIC! XD The fact is, I have very pale skin, and it was my mane in AJ that was tan. I am not bothered by that in the least, but I'm not sure if you're very fact-oriented and wanted to change it... :P
ReplyDeleteI loved the part where I "smiled through the cheese". That is SO perfect! XDDD
Poor Julian! He must be some kind of multitasker! (Wonder if any of the autographs got food on them. O.O)
And trading lunches... XDDDDDD Jamaasian high just keeps getting better and better!
Keep it up, Lostfairy! You're doing wonderfully! :D :D :D
(DXplorergirl)
Ohhh! Ok. XD Well, I'll just leave it at that if that's ok. ;P
DeleteLOL! Thanks! XD
o.o I can see it now...
GIRL 1: OH MY WORD, LOOK AT THIS! I HAVE AN AUTO WITH FOOD FROM JULIAN'S LUNCH ON IT!
GIRL 2: EEEEK! SO JEALOUS!
XD
Ha! You're so sweet! <3
And you're so hilarious! XD XD XD EEEEEEEEEEK I WANT A LUNCH AUTO!! XD
Delete(DXplorergirl)
Aw, thank ya! XD I try to be. XDDD GASP, A NEW INVENTION!
Delete*says in funny, way too dramatic voice* The lunch auto.
XD
Chapter 4 was glorious!
ReplyDeleteI loaf your writing style o.o
I can still imagine lonely Kraft in the background being a nerd and just zoning out on everyone. Because that's what I am like in real life XD
I cant wait for the next chapter!
You're doing a brilliant job at introducing the characters slowly and developing everyone's personalities. Even I struggle at that.
-AJKraft
Awww! Thank you so much!
DeleteLOL, yeah, sounds like me too... XD
Thank you so much! Your compliments are so kind! <3
I needs to sit with you at lunch because I literally barely fit in with anyone else. XDD
ReplyDeleteXD Swirl
DeleteI wouldn't either, but I'd be happy with it, and enjoy the solitude with a good book. (Not to mention cheese!)
DeleteI'd sit with you, though, because you're nice. XD Hopefully you wouldn't be offended if I chose to read occasionally! o.o I might end up calling you Percy Phelps or some such name by accident....
Hmmm. We could call ourselves the Society of Anachronistic Jammers? "Friends" would do, too. ;)
(DXplorergirl)
@Swirl
DeleteAwww! I'll add you in a lunch scene, don't ya worry! ;D
@Kara
Yeah, of course! I'd sit with Swirl ANY day! ;)
Awww, thanks guys!! :,)
Delete-swirlshine (school computer)
Could you put me in it? I have a blog. Sorry if it sounds like i'm begging! (btw, i have blonde hair and i like to draw and is strangely obsessed with cats)
ReplyDeleteSure thing! What's you actual user? :D Your not begging, don't worry!
DeleteThanks for the details!
Elizaboo1104
DeleteYAY KRAFT EXISTS NOW!
ReplyDeleteRey:Hang on, which one of us is this?
Dare:You dumbo! Its a human!
Scooter:Wait, Kraft is a human?
Rey:If Kraft is a human
And we are Kraft
Then are we all human?
Lukas:Wait, but aren't the people based on ajjam characters? none of us wear silver party hats!
Ociee:HANG ON. Kraft has another character???
Indeever:No... She cant...
Rey:Why?
Indie:Because it has to be an even amount of characters
Rey:Ohh true
Grey party hat cat appears
GPHC:sup
Dare:who are you?
GPHC:I don't know everyone seems to think I'm Kraft's main animal
Rey:Wait. What?
GPHC: *shrugs*
Dare: BUT I'M KRAFT'S MAIN ANIMAL! *screams*
Lukas:Get ahold of yourself! *grabs Dare and shakes her furiously
Dare:*passes out*
Scooter:Hang on... GPHC, that's my jacket!
GPHC: ):D
Lukas:I'm out. Bye. *leaves the room
Everyone: Me too *everyone else leaves*
Outside-
*a chicken appears*
Henrietta:What are you all doing?
Dare:Having a fight about Kraft's appearance in JH
Henrietta: *facewing*
*The actual Kraft appears*
Kraft:Can you stop fighting?
Squad: Fine...
Kraft:You know guys, there's an explanation for all this
*pulls out magical party hat*
Squad: :0
Kraft: ITS A RAINBOW PARTY HAT!
--
Well I just clogged your comment section up even more sorry
But I'm actually starting a pro investigation as to why everyone thinks GPHC is my main animal. Its fine though, I'm just thrilled to make an appearance! I love your story so much :D
-Kraft
GPHC... that's an acronym, right? *tries to pronounce it as a word* Yep. Definitely an acronym.
Delete(DXplorergirl)
@Kraft
DeleteI'm sorry! >.< I just thought you used it most. Do you want me to change it? D: And aww, thank you! :D
@Kara
LOL! XD
@Lost
DeleteXD
It's fine :)
You don't need to change it.
GPHC: >:) FITE ME DARE IM READY
Dare: >:) CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
*You can hear punching and screaming*
Squad: O.o well then...
@Kara
Yep. But I always saw guh-puh-huh-ka. Guhpahuhka. Yeah... I'm weird lol
*aardvark snort-laugh* Me too, Kraft. :D Me too.
Delete(DXplorergirl)
@Kraft
DeleteOk, thanks. XD
AH, IT'S A... fite?! XD
@Kara
LOL, why an aardvark?! XD
I don't know why an aardvark, but that is what my laugh sounds like when something is kinda funny. A piggish snort, but not made in the throat and chest like a teal pig does.
DeleteAn aardvark makes noises like that, so I figured that'd be a funny way to put one of my odd quirks in writing. :P
*proofreads comment* ...A teal pig? 0~0 *imagines*
(DXplorergirl)
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! <3 Thanks a ton for adding me in--you got my character so right! I love English, just like in your story, haha!
ReplyDeleteBut seriously, this is SO GOOD! :O
Awww! Thank you!!! ^-^ I'm glad I got it right! LOL, I was just guessing for the English part and then I saw it on AJGC somewhere and was like, "YAY!" XD
DeleteTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DARLING! XD
Soo-WEET! ... *crickets* Okay, no more weird pronunciations for me.
ReplyDeleteNow.
Chapter 5 is a wonderful addition to the tale of Jamaasian High, starting with the very first sentence. PrincessBG sounds like a very... original character. XD I'm serious, Princess. It'd be nice to meet you!
Mr. Graham has a great fashion sense! He sounds quite dapper. ;) I thought he would be teaching science, but math is a necessary subject. (If boring... >.< Ooh. *cringes*)
Out of curiosity, I once looked up the ages of various AJ YouTubers, and was surprised to learn that Bepper is only one year younger than Aparri! I can't imagine how difficult it must be for her, always being known as "Aparri's little sister". I also found out that I am older than Aparri. O.O (Mom thought that was hilarious. Please don't ask why.)
GooooOOOO AJKRAFT! :D Nice to seeya in this JH, too!
And gooooOOOO BETTER LOCKER ARRANGEMENTS! XD XD I hope she/you/Lostfairy wins! (I have the same problems with my avatar-modeled characters... does that mean I'm schizophrenic, calling me she? Yipes. She hopes not. XD)
(DXplorergirl)
o.o XD *says out LOUD* Soo-weet... XD
DeleteAwww, thank you! Ha, that she is...
Yup, for an old guy, he dresses nicely. XD Well, since Cosmo seems more science-y, I thought I'd stick Graham to math. (Agreed. Math gets boring sometimes. XD)
You didn't know? Bepper is 15 and Aparri is 16... XD Yeah, that is very true. Most people seem to think she's waaayy younger but she's really almost his age. (XD Now I find it hilarious too! And gasp! I just found out your older then moi. o.o XD)
:D Yup!
XD I/she/Lost may or may not win. XD LOL, I hope not too. XD
Me? Yeah. I'm actually only a little older than he is, though.
Deleteo.o I used to want to make YouTube AJ vids, but a. My voice is not conducive to such an activity (can you say FLAT? XD), and b. Fanfiction is more fun.
Mom is considering making my Frogsloth story into a YouTube video of sorts, by making sections of text and illustrations slide across the screen. If that was done with new chapters, would you guys want to watch that? Does it seem like fun? (Taking a mini-poll here. ;D)
Looking forward to your opinions! :D
(DXplorergirl)
Yeah, I would watch that! Wait you older then Aparri? *feels like a little kid because is six years younger then Aparri* XD (random thing XD) I think I would maybe be girly girl if it wasn't for the fact when I was born I only had 1 sister and 6 brothers. And after me another boy was born, then girl, then boy, then girl, and now NEWEST LITTLE CUTEST BABY BROTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDD
Delete@Kara
DeleteMay I guess who old you are? *squeezes eyes shut* 17? XD
Hm, if I made YouTube AJ vids, I'd probably not have my voice. Since A. My voice sounds dumb on videos. XD B. Privacy. o.o C. Um, let's just say, the computer in the dining room so anyone can hear me blabber?! And other noises might get in the vid too?! Like dishes clattering?! XD
:O A FROGSLOOOOTH VIDDDDD?! That's so cool! I vote: YEAH TOTALLY COME ON DO IT! XD
@Sarah
DeleteSo your 10? *pats back* My dear, you are still so young and free. Enjoy it. XD Okay, actually, being 10 rocks so have fun. XD And wait? JA'S YOUR ONLY SIS?! WOWIE!! XD Is Ja younger or older then you? And I'm guessing Tox is younger then you? And Pob's older? XD
@Lost
DeleteNope! Not quite yet! :P
A. Fun Fact: Most people's voices sound odd to them when heard through a loudspeaker! Everyone hears their own voice in their head a bit lower than it sounds to everyone else.
B. I understand your concern, but your voice alone cannot compromise your privacy, unless someone is able to run your vid's audio against a database with the voice of everyone else in the world.
C. That is a bigger obstacle, though a quiet room and a high-quality microphone would conquer it. :)
Yay! Sweet! Thanks for your vote! I told Mom, and she's on it! XD
No, Sarah only had one sis when she was born. Two more came after that. :P
I believe I have heard from either King or Sarah that Tox is younger, and the fact that Pob has Free Chat proves that he has an older AJ account, at least.
@Sarah
Yes! XD Ten rocks! (Actually I was a horrible brat at ten... I think I got my rebellious teen years early.)
You're very mature, and I thoroughly enjoy your company! :D Age does not make any difference, character does.
(DXplorergirl)
Yesssssssssss! More JH! Epicness in chapter form! Hey, what's up with the funny font? :D :)
ReplyDeleteThankssssssssss! XD Ok, I noticed the font too before you commented on it but I dunno how to FIX it! D: XD
DeleteXD Ugh. I know. My pictures have been going funny lately. I blame the DE's gnomes. In veritate, I am honored by their company. ;P
Delete*slow gasp* Maybe YOU have gnomes, TOO! :O
Sorry, Lost, I'd like to be of help, but I use WordPress. Any tips and tricks I've picked up would be of no use to you. (That said, I haven't picked up many. XD)
We shall advance our blogging skills together! XD Best wishes with the font situation! ;)
(DXplorergirl)
Hey Lost! Me being a blogging expert I know how to fix it 😌 XD Okay I'm kidding, but I do know how to fix it. Drag your mouse across all of Chapter 6, and make sure there's a blue background behind all the words. Then up at the top with your "tools" click font, and push default font.
DeleteHope this helps!
Remember, God made YOU!
ALL HAIL THE CARROTS!
ReplyDeleteYES! *chants* ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY CARROTS OF THE CARROT CLAN! XD
DeleteXDDD CARROT CLANNN TOMORROW IS NATIONAL CARROT CLAN DAY BE AN ORANGE PENGUIN WITH GREEN HAIR TODAY!
DeleteALL SHALL BOW DOWN TO THE MIGHTY CARROTS AS THEY TAKE OVER THE WORLD WE KNOW AS JAMAA! FIRST THEY WILL SLOWLY INVADE YOUR LUNCHES WITH POISON, PUTTING YOU INTO A SLEEP YOU CANNOT WAKE UP FROM FOR 5 WEEKS. WHILE ASLEEP THE POISON SHALL HYPNOTIZE YOU AND WHEN YOU WAKE UP YOU SHALL REMEMBER NOTHING. YOU WILL ONLY KNOW PAIN AND SUFFERING IN ALL NON-CARROTS. MWAHAHAHAHA!
DeleteToo much XD?
~.*(FrozenWarrior)*.~
I LOVE CHAPTER 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! :D I'm so glad you liked it!
DeleteDo you mind if I make something like this? I make new roleplays pretty much everyday, and something like this would be great!
ReplyDelete~Sneezy77
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS 7
ReplyDeleteHey it's K9! I love the story so far!
ReplyDeleteOMG so many comments!!!!
ReplyDeleteI just read this story, I have NO IDEA why I didn't read it before but I love it! :)
*King Tough Bunny
I love this so much. I love this too much... me needs more 😵😂
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Lost!
Remember, God made YOU!
I'm bored 😔 Help meh with my boredom XD
ReplyDeleteRemember, God made YOI!
THIS IS THE NEXT DAY. BUT MAYBE YOU ARE STILL BORED?! HOW TO NOT BE BORED IS TYPE WITH CAPS. AND SAY BANANAS. AND SPELL BANANA BANNA. BOOM
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Hi Lost! First comment on the AJJ! Just wondering, am I gonna be in here, too? If I am, just noting I have VERY LONG DARK BROWN HAIR, and it's usually in a braid or ponytail. Hehe, I;m crazy at school and on AJ, but trust me, I'm surprisingly serious at home...
ReplyDelete~*FrozenWarrior*~
Maybe I'll be in the next one! And btw Lost your such a sweet friend, I love you so much, I wish I could shower u with spike collars
ReplyDeleteMaybe! :D Awww, thanks Gfox!! Your so sweet too!
DeleteI have brown curly hair (a little past my shoulders)
ReplyDeleteI'll wear anything blue, silver, or black. Or anything to do wth foxes.
I have blue eyes
And I think u know I'm a girl XD
Dangit Lost. When all the kids started chanting aparri I should've fell head first onto the floor and started kicking and screaming "NO. NO. NO."
ReplyDeleteJkjkjkjkjk
Yay for new chapter. I still cant post anything because I can't post comments on my iPad ono
-Kraft
XD Thats literally me, Kraft XDDD
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I WANNA BE BUDDIES WITH UWUT IS UR USER D:
This story makes me feel so happy, and...joyful...and...delighted...and carefree...and...yeah. You get the idea. (I was literally looking up "happy synonyms".)
ReplyDeleteSeriously, though. I dunno how to describe it, other than those words I just listed. It just kinda makes me feel closer to you all than any other friends I've ever had before. I love us being roommates, I love us eating lunch together, I love it all. I really wish this story was real life, because if it was, I just might be the happiest person in the world. :)
Ah that is so me. A wild sleeper that is the last person to wake up. That literally is so me 😂😂😂
ReplyDeleteKids: APART I! APART I!
Me: *Bangs head on table*
If the Spinnybois come up in this.. I shall not be very happy with them, and start asking them questions like why they meditate on J2. XDD
Oh gosh I'm so tired I need to go this comment probs is sounding weird
I AM A RHINO HEAR ME ROAR
Remember my lil beans God made uuuu
By mommy by by
:O IM IN IT :OO Seriously when I saw the word Frozen in there I almost pased out in my chair. I was like "YES YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Ok I need to stop I'm gonna pass out."
ReplyDelete~.*FrozenWarrior*.~
Ok, and extra note about the real me, I'm a grammar naxi. (IS that how you spell it? ) What I mean by that is I HATE IT when people use improper grammar. Just a note XD
ReplyDelete~.*FrozenWarrior*.~
EKANS! Who was fighting!?
ReplyDeleteWho told HQ?!
ARGH GUYS YOU DO TO MANY CLIFF HANGERS! WAHHHHHHH XD
*King Tough Bunny
Nice!!
ReplyDeleteIn the next chapters you'll find me fangirling over Snowyclaw.. ehehehe
Lost sure is lost.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you developed the story. The descriptions, story line and how related it is to Animal Jam, very well thought of! I especially love the use of the HQ here!
Other than that, I love how you wrote Sir Gilbert's personality. He is, by far, my favourite teacher-Alpha yet to appear here. Liza is still as her motherly figure and making her my number one Alpha still haha.
Greely reminds me of Snape from Harry Potter. "I doubt any of you will pass this class..." HA-!
Lovely story! Keep it up!
P.S. If I were to appear here, I'd probably be in archery club because my seal constantly carry a bow and arrows, with a scarf over her neck. Then again, you met enough people, and I want you to develop on them before throwing a bunch of other characters, so I guess I don't want to appear here haha.
Lost if she is rude again you should make me go to her and punch her. (True story I punched a girl... long story) Lol jk but I WILL be here to defend u (ninja insert)
ReplyDeleteOH. MY. GOODNESS.
ReplyDeleteI knew you were a good writer, but nothing prepared me for this!!! I was smiling wide all the way through these 10 chapters. Now I know why people keep begging you to write new chapters!!! You sound like a legitimate published author. It's true!
You aren't just a good writer. You're an EXCELLENT writer. You're a FANTASTIC writer!!! I literally cannot wait for chapter 11!!!!!!!! :D :D :D
All in all... I rate this story 11/10. Keep on writing, Lost!
~DoomyPanda
I can't wait to be in it more! Your writing skills are 10000000000000/10!
ReplyDeleteAww, thank you so much! ^-^
DeleteYUS! BOOTUFUL CHAPTER!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!!!!!!!! :D
DeleteOMG I LOVED CHAPTER 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteIT AMAZING
I GTG EAT DINNER!
Byeee! :D
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! I'M GLAD YOU LOVED IT!!!
DeleteHoly parakeets! This is the best story on a blog ever!!! 8D I super love your blog lostfairy, Its a total hit! :D even my Parakeet loves it! :P
ReplyDeleteThank you SO SO MUCH! This means a LOT to me! ^.^
Deleteidk if this sounds rude but I noticed I only appeared in one chapter ages ago
ReplyDeleteam I skipping school or just hiding up a tree or something lol
Again I hope this doesn't sound rude but uh yeah
-kraft
Actually, thank you for mentioning this! I understand what you mean but if you think about it, lots and lots of people are not mentioned a lot. It's because there are SO many characters, I can't write every one in every chapter. Please try to understand that I don't want a big bunch of characters in one scene and get things confusing.
DeleteThanks!
I love your writing.
ReplyDeleteAwwww, thank you!!!
DeleteThe chapter is great! I can't wait for the next!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! It means a lot! :D
DeleteI DIDN"T NEED TO KNOW ABOUT THAT FUNGAS LOST XDDD (JK)
ReplyDeleteWHAT, WHY?! IT'S AN AMAZING FUNGUS! XD
Delete*Secretly wonders if the fungus is a real fungus*
DeleteIt IS a real fungus! XD
DeleteOOOOOOOOH XD
DeleteAHHH WHAT WERE THEY TALKING ABOUT, I MEAN IK THEY WERE TALKING ABOUT YOU BUT WHAT DID YOU DO WRONG
ReplyDelete*really needs the new chapter*
You shall see! >:D Later, that is... XD
DeleteWho knows? Maybe I did something wrong... maybe I didn't....
*is really happy you like the story*
Hi, I'm henrythegreat4. I've been reading your blog for a while, but have never commented. I was wondering if you could put me in the story.
ReplyDeleteHi there! Thank you for commenting, I love any comments! XD
DeleteI could try! But since I don't know you very well, I don't know your personality, likes, dislikes, how you talk, that sort of thing. But I could try! ^.^ Just give me a description of your main AJ look!
:O
ReplyDelete):O
OH. NO. THEY. DIDN'T.
If those girls in your class really said those things...
SWIRL WOULD ATTACK
Seriously, though. I'd be mad. Very mad. It made me mad just reading about how mean they were.
You get the idea. :p
I'd also go running after you if you ran out of class. :)
Not saying you should add that though, of course! I don't have that class with you, I believe!
XDDDDD
Delete*laughs*
Honestly, you are so sweet! Everyone in this community is so sweet and nice. They stick up for one another. ^-^
And thank you for saying this! It means a lot, even if your joking around! XD
*thinks* Nope, your not in that class. But your are in: homeroom, P.E, and drama! XD
THANKS FOR COMMENTING, YOU SWEET SWEET GURL!!! XD
*Finally goes through the comments on JH again and sees a reply* YEY! XD!
DeleteHehe! Anything for a friend! :D
And that's why I love the blogger community! :)
WOOOOOO! 3 CLASSES!! MORE THAN I HAD WITH ANY OF MY IRL FRIENDS THIS YEAR!
*Thinks for a minute*
Ohh! Okay, I did have one friend that I had 3 classes with. XDD!
NO PROBLEMMMMMMMMMMM, XD!
INTENSEEE
ReplyDeleteYEEEEEAAAAH!! XD
DeleteTHE NEW CHAPTERS ARE AWESOME
ReplyDeleteWHO WAS FOLLOWING YOU
Also, if the lights went out while we were painting, and I heard somebody bang on the door like that, i would freak out, like, extremely XDD
THANK YOU SO MUCH, SARAH!!!! :DDD
DeleteYOU'LL SEE! ):D
SAME! I would be freaked out. XDDDD
WOOP! We're getting a mystery involved in the story! :D
ReplyDeleteWoop, woop!! :DDD
Delete*Reads the chapters while listening to music*
ReplyDelete*Finishes them*
WOAH
OKAY
I AM NOW TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY HOOKED ON THIS STORY!!!!
I NEED TO KNOWWW WHO THAT WASSSS!!!!!!!
AND THEY BETTER NOT KIDNAP YOU. XDD!
Sorry for the caps, but if I said this stuff in real life, I would probably say it in caps, XDDD!
All craziness of me aside, I feel a plot twist coming onnnnn! ):D
I want to guess who the shadowy figure was, but I won't because the suspense would be spoiled if I guessed right. XDDDD!
OH YESSSSS, THANK YOU SO MUCH, SWIRL!!!!! THAT MEANS A TON!!!!! :D
DeleteHonestly, this comment made me so happy. I'm so glad you enjoy my story!! :DDD
I love caps. XD
Hehehe, you'll just have to wait and seeeeee!! >:D XD
Yeah, that would stink if you guessed. XDDD
No problem! ;D
DeleteYaaay, I'm glad it did! :)
XD, so do I (as you can see, XD)
Yeah, so now I will literally check your blog every day so I don't miss the next chapter when it comes out, XDDD!
OMG GUYS I KNOW WHO IS THE SILHOUETTE IS!!!!
ReplyDeleteIT IS...
A BANANA
BOOM,
LOST CONFIRM XDDD
Oh my goodness, can you imagine how weird it would be to get chased by a walking banana?! XD
DeleteWow! You are absolutely amazing! This story is so great! XD
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, thank you so much, Transions!! That means a lot to me. ^.^
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